11. Which is the best version of the underlined portion of sentence 6 (reproduced below)? Early on for example my anxiety about getting lost was so bad that I was even scared to go for a walk or to take a bus or the subway.
Answer: C
Early on, for example, my anxiety about getting lost was so bad that I was even scared to go for a walk or to take a bus or the subway.
The best version of the underlined portion is "Early on, for example," which correctly punctuates the introductory phrase. The comma after "on" provides clarity and proper grammatical structure.
A) (as it is now)
This option lacks the necessary comma after "on," making the sentence less clear. The absence of punctuation disrupts the flow of the introductory phrase, which can confuse readers.
B) on for example,
This option incorrectly places "on" at the beginning and lacks the appropriate introductory structure. It also improperly uses a comma at the end, failing to connect the phrase to the main clause effectively.
C) on, for example,
This option is incorrect due to the initial "on," which does not provide the necessary context. Although the comma placement is correct, starting with "on" does not fit grammatically as an introductory phrase.
D) on, for example
Similar to option C, this version begins with "on," which does not correctly introduce the sentence. The absence of a comma after "example" also disrupts the intended pause and clarity needed in this context.
Conclusion
Option C is the correct answer as it properly introduces the clause with the necessary punctuation. All other options fail to maintain the appropriate sentence structure or clarity needed for effective communication, emphasizing the importance of correct introductory phrases in writing.